Yelling Through A Quarrel

If I had never met you

I wouldn’t feel the pain

Of losing your sweet love

I wouldn’t feel insane.

Is this all we had together?

Is this what love really is?

Yelling through a quarrel

And making it up with a kiss.
Why can’t we get along?

Why do we have to fight?

We starve true love by day

And feed lust all through the night.

I wish we’d settle down

I wonder where peace went.

Why do we pick at each other?

Why can’t we be content?

You are my everything.

I don’t want you to be gone.

I can tolerate anything

And will always carry on.

Skies seem sunny

When you are here…

There is that gloom

In my atmosphere.

I love you so much

You are all that I have.

Without you, my world

Would be depressing and sad.

You are my idol

My heart never denies

But it cuts to the bone

What I see in your eyes.

You want me to stop

You want me to be friends

But You will be my true love

Until my life ends.


Sadah

Totally unprofessional; Trying to figure out what writing is all about; I am just a name.

19 Comments

johnlmalone · November 18, 2017 at 10:23 am

The first twelve lines are really strong, especially 11 & 12, almost Shakespearean in their power and succinctness. Have you thought of ending the poem there? The rest is good though fairly conventional

    Sadah · November 18, 2017 at 10:46 am

    I am so honored and overwhelmed that you related some part of my work with that of Shakespeare’s. I haven’t received a better appreciation my entire life. And I didn’t really think about anything I wrote. All of it just flowed.

simplyaubreyelaine · November 23, 2017 at 4:16 am

Great flow. Very honest.

grumpygorman · November 23, 2017 at 5:13 pm

This is wonderful!

    Sadah · November 23, 2017 at 6:10 pm

    Thank you so much

olivera77 · November 23, 2017 at 5:56 pm

A delight to read ! Great piece !

    Sadah · November 23, 2017 at 6:10 pm

    Thank you so much

myeternalpartner · November 24, 2017 at 2:32 am

Very soulful! Thanks for sharing.

    Sadah · November 24, 2017 at 9:06 am

    Thank you for appreciating.

chewingonglass · November 25, 2017 at 4:08 am

Painfully sweet and sad mixed in a blender of honesty… Great poem

    Sadah · November 25, 2017 at 8:55 am

    Thank you so much

Rida Yumn Ahmed · January 6, 2018 at 8:28 am

This blog is a treasure❤You are wonderful Sadah…God bless you❤

    Sadah · January 6, 2018 at 10:04 am

    Thank you so much.

Noor_87Khan · February 14, 2018 at 3:45 pm

Really beautiful…heart touching and heart breaking at the same time

thestubbornaustralian · February 14, 2018 at 6:20 pm

I noticed the shift in styles towards the end but a great read. Really strong and moving. Keep up the good work

mindworldfuture · February 15, 2018 at 12:23 am

Bravo!

stringoftales · February 28, 2018 at 8:44 am

This was

True Light · March 5, 2018 at 4:36 pm

This is great, love it!

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