The Wrong Turn

Everything was going well

Until hatred started to dwell

The world was no longer beautiful

No one now had a mind so peaceful

Comparisons became an important part of life

Self satisfaction no longer thrived

World suddenly changed a bit

On each other’s weakness, everyone started to hit

Relations were no longer strong

Money started to affect all bonds

Patience no longer remained

Everyone became so insane

Love was now no more an emotion

It was now a new form of relation

It was now not about the heart feeling the motion

But about the body feeling the sensation and the vibration

Everything in the world changed so fast

That I couldn’t keep up with the pace and was left aghast.


Sadah

Totally unprofessional; Trying to figure out what writing is all about; I am just a name.

15 Comments

olivera77 · November 19, 2017 at 9:39 am

Beautiful !

Namrata D Prabhakar · November 24, 2017 at 7:38 pm

Sad reality of today. Very well expressed

    Sadah · November 24, 2017 at 9:06 pm

    I tried to express it. Maybe the society tries to accept it.

      Namrata D Prabhakar · November 24, 2017 at 9:10 pm

      Humanity is the greatest religion and till it is alive the world remains beautiful

        Sadah · November 24, 2017 at 9:11 pm

        That is the problem with our world. Humanity is dying everyday.

          Namrata D Prabhakar · November 24, 2017 at 9:13 pm

          Lets be positive

          Sadah · November 24, 2017 at 9:23 pm

          That is all we can do.

chewingonglass · November 25, 2017 at 4:14 am

Beautiful and honest…

Carly (message in stanza) · November 27, 2017 at 7:41 am

Wow, I can feel the intensity and the pain of this broken relationship. Well said.

Melica Niccole · November 28, 2017 at 10:03 am

Sounds like the true reality of this world from past to present.

    Melica Niccole · November 28, 2017 at 10:04 am

    You’re a great poet for being able to capture all of that

      Sadah · November 28, 2017 at 10:12 am

      Thank you so much. Humbled!

    Sadah · November 28, 2017 at 10:18 am

    I tried to put it into words.

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