Long Drive

​That unforgettable long drive

On that beautiful summer night

I couldn’t have asked for more

And my life couldn’t have been more bright.

I was there with a surprise to mark your important day

But to my dismay

There was a shock for me

While I waited for you at the bay.

You were no longer mine

I had to go away

But then I heard you say

Please stay!


Totally unprofessional; Trying to figure out what writing is all about; I am just a name.


olivera77 · November 21, 2017 at 12:07 pm

A beautiful peace ! The intensity is all in the last two words…”Please stay” it brings tears to my eyes…..

    Sadah · November 21, 2017 at 12:40 pm

    Thank you for your appreciation.

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